Do you like my lyrics?

I wrote a song about things going on in my life right now.





UNTITLED (for now)


Throw in a bowl of confusion


And you've entered my life


Everytime I'm with you


I feel alive


I kick off my shoes when I enter the room


Pick up a book


Turn down the radio





(chorus)Now it's 4 am and I'm feeling drained


I've gotta clean up this mess I've made


How do I hurt you when you're not around


Nothing makes sense in this town





You were always a morning person


I'm the one who sleeps away the sun


Waiting for you to fall for me....again


But until then....


I'll be in my own world thinking of ways


To make this day go faster





CHORUS





You fill the pages in my mind


You make me wonder


I'ts time to unwind


Time to put away that anger


And crawl into my bedsheets


Because I want you to join me


In my imaginary world





CHORUS





What do you guys think? It's going to be a slower song...kind of coffeehouse accoustic sounding. So don't think it's going to be some upbeat pop song.

Do you like my lyrics?
ah i think they're wonderful and amazing.


i especially love the chorus!





i can see this song being on top 20 someday. ;]


ok but serisously its good.


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Reply:Thats very good. I like it =)
Reply:your lyric's rulez girl......it's like a story....like the chorus....keep it up.....
Reply:I actually quite like them :)
Reply:Wow, the lyrics are amazing! I wish I had talent like that, seriously.



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